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April Whalley's avatar

Excellent stuff 👍👍

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Michael Edward's avatar

Clever word play, very enjoyable indeed.

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C. Elyse's avatar

And that’s because if F.E.A.R - false expectations appear real. Very nice!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

This reminds me of “For each a road, for everyman a religion” F.E.A.R an amazing song by Ian Brown of Stone Roses.

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Marinarena's avatar

I checked out the song and video, been meaning to do that with Ian and the Stone Roses in general. Great concept for the vid with Ian traveling backward. Wow... my words connecting to others' music and visual imagery. Together it's all poetry!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8f8wAXDZ9D0

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

That’s very coincidental indeed. There’s a cover of his song too by George Michael. It’s a wonderful song. So what inspired you to write in this specific style?

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Marinarena's avatar

I happened to watch George Michael's version also. Well done.

Fear has been on my mind , especially since the Covid pandemic and its consequences. I keep seeing the various ways that fear was interpreting as the acronym and took it from there poetically. I enjoy how Ian spun the acronym in a positive sense. That could inspire me with another "F.E.A.R" piece.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

That’s a brilliant idea to mould fear and transform it to something creative. Covid definitely brought fear to an incomprehensible level.

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Funny creative!

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